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Wednesday 31 August 2011

Washing Machine Explosion


There was little boy called Goku. He was shouting and shaking because the washing machine was out of control! He gasped with fear and shouted, "Everybody the washing machine is about to explode!" Goku had cried because his washing machine was destroyed. He ran for help and grabbed the officer's hand, screaming at him like he was his mother.

2 comments:

  1. Great picture Ebenezzer.I like how you put the verbs in different colors.

    Great Job!!!

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  2. Well done for using the interesting verbs we found in our story in your own writing. Keep looking for more interesting verbs when you read to add to your memory so your writing can get better too!

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